What Should the Viewer Notice?
Make a Video — One Skill, One Short Film at a Time: Week 2
Your camera records everything inside the frame. Your job is to decide which part matters.
Last week, we began with three shots: wide, medium and close-up. Filming someone opening a notebook showed how to establish a setting, show an action and draw attention to a detail.
This week, we will keep that simple subject and ask a different question:
When someone watches this shot, what should they notice first?
The notebook? The person opening it? The words on the page? Or the colourful shopping bag, bright window and tangled cables behind them?
A picture can be sharp and correctly exposed yet still be confusing. If several things compete for attention, the viewer has to work out which one matters.
This week’s skill is learning to make that choice for them.
The Frame Is Your First Storytelling Decision
Framing means deciding what appears inside the picture, where it appears and what you leave outside.
Imagine filming a person opening a notebook before beginning a project.
In one version, they are a small figure at the far end of a busy room. We notice the room before we notice the action.
In another, their hands and notebook occupy most of the picture. We immediately understand that opening the notebook matters.
Neither framing is automatically wrong. The first could introduce the workspace; the second could introduce the task.
A useful shot is one whose composition supports its purpose.
Before recording, finish this sentence:
“I want the viewer to notice…”
For this week’s activity, a useful answer is:
“I want the viewer to notice the hands opening the notebook.”
That gives you a clear reason for every adjustment you make.
What You Need
- A phone or camera.
- A notebook and someone to open it.
- A table and a safe place to support the camera.
- A few everyday objects to create a busy background.
- Around 20 minutes.
Use your phone’s normal video setting. Choose landscape or portrait according to where you intend to show the video, and keep that orientation throughout the exercise.
You do not need an expensive lens, a studio or editing software. We are practising decisions you can make before pressing record.
Get Filming: One Subject, Three Different Versions
Record three short clips of the same action. Aim for around eight to ten seconds each, leaving a brief pause before and after the notebook opens.
Keep the action, camera height and lighting as consistent as practical. We want to see what changes when you alter the background and framing.
Version 1: Record the Scene as You Find It
Place the camera where you might naturally put it and film the notebook opening.
For this exercise, leave some ordinary clutter in view: perhaps a mug, a bright bag or a few cables. Check that no private information is visible.
Play the clip back immediately.
Ask:
- What do I notice first?
- Can I clearly see the notebook opening?
- Does anything pull my attention away?
Do not rush to label this a bad shot. It is your starting point, and it gives you something useful to compare.
Version 2: Change the Background
Keep the camera and notebook in approximately the same positions. Now remove or reposition two or three distractions.
Move the bright bag out of view. Put loose cables aside. If a mug overlaps the hands, move it to the edge of the table or remove it.
Record the same action again.
A background does not have to be empty. A pencil beside the notebook might help explain that someone is about to write. A stack of unrelated packaging probably does not.
Keep details that support the story. Reconsider details that compete with it.
Version 3: Change the Framing
Use the improved background, then move the camera closer or choose a slightly different angle.
Try framing the hands, notebook and enough table to make the action easy to understand. Leave room for the notebook to open fully without the important movement disappearing beyond the edge.
Record the action again.
Notice how changing the camera position can exclude distractions without moving everything in the room. You are choosing a more useful view of the same place.
For this first exercise, move the camera rather than relying on digital zoom. Move carefully, and keep it securely supported.
Compare the Three Clips
Watch them in order:
- The scene as you found it.
- The same framing with a simpler background.
- The simpler background with more deliberate framing.
If possible, show them to someone without explaining your intention first. Ask:
“What did you notice first in each clip?”
Their answer is more useful than simply asking which clip they liked.
This week’s success is three comparable clips and one clear explanation of why your chosen version works better.
Why Backgrounds Matter More Than We Think
When we look at a scene directly, we already know what interests us. It is easy to overlook the things around it.
The camera includes those things too.
Bright areas, strong colours, readable signs and unexpected movement can all compete with the subject. A television behind an interviewee may draw attention because the picture keeps changing. A bright window may dominate a shot even when the person is the intended focus.
Background shapes can also create awkward overlaps. A lamp or shelf edge behind someone’s head may become distracting once you watch the recording.
Before filming, scan the whole frame.
Look at the corners, the space behind the subject and the area into which the action will move. Sometimes shifting the camera a few centimetres is enough to improve the shot.
Make the Subject Easy to Find
There are several simple ways to direct attention. Try one at a time so you can see what each change achieves.
Give the Subject Enough Space in the Picture
If the notebook is the important object, it needs to be large enough to understand.
A close shot can reveal fingers lifting the cover or a pen touching the page. But moving too close can remove useful context or cut off the action.
Choose the distance that makes the important moment clear.
Use Position with a Purpose
The centre is often a sensible place for a beginner’s main subject. A straightforward shot of hands opening a notebook may work perfectly with the notebook centred.
Placing a subject to one side can also be useful, particularly when you need room for another object, a person’s gaze or a later caption.
The rule of thirds is a helpful experiment: imagine two evenly spaced vertical and horizontal lines dividing the frame into nine rectangles, then try placing the subject near a line or intersection.
Treat it as an option. A clear centred composition is better than an awkward arrangement made only to follow a rule.
Separate the Subject from Its Surroundings
A dark notebook may be difficult to distinguish on a dark table. A lighter surface underneath can make its outline easier to see.
Likewise, shifting a person away from a busy background may reduce overlaps and help the shot feel clearer.
You can explore background blur later. For now, practise creating separation through position, colour and a simpler view.
Leave Room for Movement
A frame must work throughout the action.
Check what happens when the cover opens, the hands move or the person reaches for a pen. Something that fits neatly into the first frame may disappear from view halfway through the clip.
Rehearse the movement once while watching the screen before you record.
Three Practical Examples from My Work
Across teaching, music and sailing videos, the question remains the same: what does the viewer need to see at this moment?
A Science Demonstration
A wide view of a laboratory can establish the setting. When a colour change becomes the important moment, the liquid needs to be clearly visible.
A plain background behind suitable glassware can make that change easier to distinguish. Nearby bottles and labels may be useful context, but they can also compete with the result.
The framing should let the viewer see the evidence that the explanation depends on.
An Organ Performance
A view of the performer and instrument introduces the performance. A closer view of the keyboards, hands or pedalboard reveals a particular technique.
If the purpose is to show a passage played on the pedals, that movement needs enough space in the picture to be understood.
The best view depends on whether the video is presenting the music, demonstrating a skill or doing both.
A Sailing Video
A wide shot can show the fleet and the course. A closer view can help explain a crew movement or sail adjustment.
On the river, you cannot tidy the entire background. You can choose your position, angle and timing so that the relevant boat or action is easier to follow.
That makes this week’s exercise especially useful: sometimes you improve a picture by moving objects; sometimes you improve it by changing your view.
A Teaching Reflection: Make One Decision at a Time
With my teaching experience and access to a range of filming equipment, I can see how easily a simple activity could become overloaded.
We could discuss lenses, exposure, lighting, camera movement and editing. Each has its place. But for someone beginning to make videos, that can turn one manageable task into several unfamiliar problems.
For this series, I want each week to produce something small that a reader can complete and recognise as progress.
This week, that might mean spotting a distracting bag, moving it, and recording a clearer shot. It might mean moving the camera closer and discovering that the action suddenly makes sense.
Those are useful filmmaking decisions.
A learner does not have to explain every technical setting to say:
“This version works better because I can see what the hands are doing.”
That is understanding we can build on.
Pro Tips: Small Changes That Make a Difference
- Watch on a larger screen if you can. Distractions that are hard to spot on a phone may become obvious.
- Change one thing, then compare. You will learn more easily when you know what caused the improvement.
- Check focus after moving the camera. Confirm that the important hands or object remain sharp; test any focus-lock control your device provides.
- Give the action breathing room. Allow a moment before it starts and after it finishes.
- Keep useful context. A completely bare setting may remove information the viewer needs.
- Look around the edges. Stray objects and awkward cuts often appear there.
- Make a quick test recording. Playback is a better check than assuming the view on the screen will work.
Optional Extension: Tell Two Stories with the Same Notebook
Once you have completed the basic activity, try two different intentions.
Story A: Someone is starting a productive morning.
Include a pen, a clear writing space and the hands opening the notebook.
Story B: Someone has discovered an important detail.
Frame a finger pointing to a particular line on a page. Use invented text, and make it large enough to read if the words themselves matter.
The object has stayed the same, but your choices tell the viewer to notice something different.
This is where composition begins to become storytelling.
Before You Finish
Choose your clearest clip and complete these three sentences:
- “I wanted the viewer to notice…”
- “I changed…”
- “The change helped because…”
There is no requirement to publish it. Save the clips so you can compare your work as the series develops.
A Better Video Begins with a Clearer Intention
Last week, we learnt to show a subject at three different shot sizes. This week, we have learnt to give a shot a clear purpose.
A stronger video can begin with a modest change: a distraction moved aside, a better camera position or a little more room for the action.
Before your next recording, pause and ask:
“What should the viewer notice?”
Then look at the frame and make sure you have given them a fair chance to notice it.
You can find a lot more details on the website that accompanies the series at https://makingbetter.video/
Next Sunday: High, Low or Eye Level? — How Camera Height Changes the Story




